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Old 05-24-05, 01:10 AM   #9
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Voted For: Bonecollector

Punches-Bone...none was really hard hitten,but i can see the potential in ya verse...5/10

Multis-Bone...u got this on lock thru the whole verse...try addin some hard punches to the multis then u good ta go in future battles....7/10

Vocab-Tie...pretty much basic on both parts...i really dont care bout this category much..but try expandin it a lil more

Personals-Ca$...nothin ta really say on this,but Ca$ add more punches ta ya personals...Bone add more personals

Strucuture-Ca$

Opener-Tie...both of yall came off weak on this category

Closer-Ca$...ok closer,liked how u added it wit the personal

V/Bone due to more punches and nicely done wordplay

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