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From: I F0rg0t...h0l 0n lemme think |
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IP:
Voted For: Bonecollector
Punches-Bone...none was really hard hitten,but i can see the potential in ya verse...5/10
Multis-Bone...u got this on lock thru the whole verse...try addin some hard punches to the multis then u good ta go in future battles....7/10
Vocab-Tie...pretty much basic on both parts...i really dont care bout this category much..but try expandin it a lil more
Personals-Ca$...nothin ta really say on this,but Ca$ add more punches ta ya personals...Bone add more personals
Strucuture-Ca$
Opener-Tie...both of yall came off weak on this category
Closer-Ca$...ok closer,liked how u added it wit the personal
V/Bone due to more punches and nicely done wordplay
RTF links in sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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