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Old 05-24-05, 11:05 AM   #46
archieDX
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Voted For: Esco

tephlon/esco:
best line: lets rate rhymes on a scale, hence why your a LightWeight
Even british emcees sit an tell you...''Oi, you aint tight, mate!''
cold, that line there is a finisher, original, personal, and aggressive, arch likes!
and then you follow through with:
I wont lie, i got my hand on a gun while you cluth ya Ring Peice
fuck Livin Legendz, dudes idea of ''FAMILY'' fun is fuckin his Neice
both paedophillic and hillarios always a winning combination, lol. but on a level why i liked this drop more than lyricals was cos tephlons was hittin me with shit i aint heeard no-one say, so originality scores big, both structures were relatively clean.
on a negative 2 teph though your weakest line was:
if lyrics were a Leece, you'd be about 5 months OverDue
my pockets would be so big from your late payments.....
people would be like ''woah! happy ta see me, arent you?''
sounds like it was a bit rushed if u ask me. didnt really get that bit overall though 9/10 your originality and generally razor sharp p;unchlines won this one for me

lyrical mastermind:
your flow was nice, structure was a def 8.5/10. you dropped a few cold lines, my favourate was:
I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks(15)
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'
i like the bit bout the retarded kid, there wasn't a lot wrong with your flow and to be honest this match is tighter than the votes are showing but lyrical, you just didn't have the killer lines, you need to make sure you drop some kind of a gem when your battleing and i didnt see that today just a generic flow-diss. gear up the personals, and i think that you could have had this battle but as it stands tephlon/esco winz it 4 me


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