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Old 05-24-05, 12:48 PM   #15
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Voted For: CeleriTy

Kinda one sided
breakdown--

D.R.- Wasnt feelin yours, opener kinda got my attention, BUT punches were wack, your only personal didnt hit hard and tha Rasheed line was sorry...so was the Detroit line 3/10

sorry no beef juss facts

Celerity- I was feelin your more because yours was more flow than words...the opener was koo the flow was koo and your punches hit him and your closer was iight 5/10

Overall: Use better personals and punches D.R. and you probably wouldve hung wit C.
For C, next battle be a lil more creative with your punches
Flow- C
Structure- C
Punches- C
Opener- C
Closer- C
Multis- Neither
Personals- D.R. (the only 1)

honest votes should be returned honestly :thumb:
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