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My vote goes to Whyte Ave. because I was feeling his approach a bit more and was also sensing more creativity and imagery in his piece. Both had a quite unusal approach of topic which I enjoyed to read, good emotion as well but Stanza's wasn't as clear as Whyte Ave's drop in my opinion. I like how both of you kept the vocab rather simple, it gave the poem a more serene yet powerful vibe
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