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Voted For: Ghost

Youz Battlin A Pro,So I Suggest Ya Come Prepared With ya lyriks
Leave Ya Deceased Like Da Dead,N No Reason to Maintain Ya Spirits
—4, an okay punch
Ima Capture Ya Soul,N Let It Rot With mA Victimz
You Couldnt Be -Sick- If Ya Linez Had Break outz With Symptomz
—1, weak, could’ve made it a lil better
Take Ya out in -Secondz- Cuz I got No Time To Waste
Surely My Linez Are more XQUIZIT,Urz Are Decently Embraced
—4, this one was okay too, should’ve added a persona in there
Leave ya Heart As A Pendent or Even better A Souvenire
Steppin Up To Battle,But Steady Shiverin As u get Near
—5, eh, this one was decent
This battlez Gon be A Tragic Mistake For Ya Record n ya text
Done Ripped My Last Victimz So u Volunteerin to be Next
—2, not really a punch here

overall – u had a decent drop (I didn’t want to do ur
whole verse so don’t get mad), but u had some okay
punches, couple of them could’ve been worded better,
and next time u battle.. add some personas in there too
16/50

there aint a Humen Standing that "Envy my Post"
ill Kill ur Apearance in humanity then you'll really be "GhOsT"-//
—4, an okay persona-punch, make it harder though
i Coss Lyrical Casualtiez~After We~Battle my Rhymen Capsulez "Sinkin Tight"-
comen at me? man ill blow ur Brain left to remind u u aint "THINKEN RIGHT"-//
—3, work on ur vocab, & ur punch was ai
Terrifying RukUs~i Encounter~Around The~Hood as i SLay Lyrically And "Barry Him Deep"--
even if u play'd nba in miami with the jersey on u still wouldnt be carrying "HeaT"-//
—5, haha, this punch was decent
is Not GhosT~why he "Wanten The Streetz?"-
Ur Linez like Juilce at the corner store in the ghetto man ur "Punchez is Cheap"-
—2, this one was kinda weak here
rippen his Metaphorz-as i Indore-Power-u cowards neeed to "LEAVE IT BE"--
in flowen its like aol chatten we talken with s/n's but u aint "SEEING ME"-//
—0, nah, not feelin this one

overall – u had a decent drop also (didn’t want to
do ur whole drop.. that’s too much), but anyway,
ur punches were pretty decent, some of them were
wack though, & work on that shit too, & fix ur structure
stretched lines = wackness.. but also add some personas
too, 14/50

RTF Ghost, or this vote gets removed

Vote removed by Skriptz's request