IP:
the hook was ok could of been better but ya flow was hot and ya bars was ok...
my words are weapons like imma OG, critical wit bars like these
strip off ya feet then run em ova wit my new Timbos and Nike's
fuckin women pices and bust in scorpios to show em whats up
then i pull out tha jason mechete to act bad and cut up a cunt
haha had me laughing not bad no word-play but decent...
ya ending was good and everything was nice to read word but u aint really say shit or should i say much?? i mean flow is decent just no vocab and no punches or anything stood out but keep droping them like its hot word up u will only get better mad props..... 6.5
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