Voted For: Bonecollector

Casper
um very good stucturre ncie flow but you have no complexity in your verse you need to add bigger words and you need to stop using punches so self glorified none of ya punches hit ahrd cause you didnt aim them towards your oppenent some ddi but lots were madly off spot work on with hitting with personals and wordplay and keep elevating 1

Diagnosis
um not bad decent verse stucture wasn't to bad but you had a weird rhyme scheme good flow though nice complexity good vocab hard hitting personals and hard hitting wordplay that crip line got to me. overall i think that your verse had the better flow hands down just a straight up better overall verse from you. keep elevating.

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