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Old 05-24-05, 06:15 PM   #22
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Paranoid

This was a pretty good topical battle but ima have to give this one to paranoid

Paranoid
Nice drop homie , you had good emotions , nice feeling ...good imagery , and some nice structure... your drop was enough to beat omnivision , i was really feelin your drop...Wordplay and vocab was good , could have been alittle better.. but overall it was pretty good, overall nice drop Para you did enough to take this battle nice job.

Omnivison
Nice drop to you too .. you just lacked alittle emotions , dont get my wrong you had a nice drop.. just felt you didnt do enoigh to take this battle...Your structure was okay looks like some of your lines were alittle stretched... Wordplay and vocab was pretty good , felt it could have been better...
Overall nice job good topic , nice drop..keep it up

Overall vote Paranoid , for having better emotions , nice imagery , and good overall drop
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