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Old 05-24-05, 06:49 PM   #22
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Voted For: Wickedclown

L.I. Verse

I'll school you in text or basketball, yah in for a sonning
Cause his punches r like air ball's the way they hit nothing
^ nice opener i good flow punch good too

Even his girl abused him, by the end ill have my fun
Cuz I'll smack a bitch while you just get slapped by one
^ punch ok...fake personal though so...

This ugly fuck is gon call it quits, who cares, fine
Cuz this kid recedes more than his fucking hairline
^ flow good, punch good

Cut the crap, lets talk verses and how much he missed me
Wick flips my punches so much, my structure got dizzy
^ again nice punch....decent flow

He has no chance at winning it, so give it all your worth b
L.I. dropped dead gorgeous in this battle, Wick stopped after the 4th D
^ Rhyme forced at the end and kinda self-g at the beginning of the 2nd line

Overall
Consistant verse no personals, punches were good i liked this verse not special from L.I. to be honest and the closer wasn't as good as previous bars to be honest

Wickedclown Verse

everyone says "oh my god LIs so ownage at text"
switch the quote around and drown like all the rest *bitch*
^ Opener coulda been worded better...lacked connection

faggot used to be known for sonnin cats right and left
now ya ass is broke tryin to Drive hard like Unicef
^ lol i liked this good punch/personal

leavin ya chin cleft, boilin u like radioactive compounds
in the game ya just a bus boy rydin greyhounds
^ lol crazy good rhyme

gettin shit crackin in here and i aint talkin bout ya voice
ya crew fucked up, this kid cant rap they made tha wrong choice
^ 1st line good on his age that was aimed...nice bar

ths 'emcees indistructible' even had his 'jersey retired'
used to spit meaningful lyrics now ya leavin me uninspired
^ nice closer i liked it

Overall
Whoa WC came hard wit the punches in that one...honestly best spit from ya there...some good punches equal perhaps to L.I. stronger in 1 or 2 areas...you surprised me...this was good...some nice personals in there too closer was stronger than L.I. but Opener wasn't...but this was a good battle...

V/Wickedclown...more consistant less SG more personals, punches were also good too...L.I. came good IMO but WC got a surprise win here...RTF in my sig (vs EC) Within 3 days or vote removed
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