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Old 05-24-05, 07:31 PM   #11
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Voted For: schema

Imma have ta put da tool ta ya dome and put 2 iN-Ya...(1)
cuz dawgie da buLLeTz sTaY HoT even iN De-CeMBa...(2)
4...weak opener, just sum shit talkin!!
if i CreEp-Ya,imma SleEp-Ya* when i SnEeK-Ya...(3)
den put u in a ChUrCh GeTiN ViEwEd but ya not a PrEaCh-a...(4)
4...weak again, nice multies though!!
dawg i know bout PuShiN-DruGz,n ShOotiN-DuDeZ...(5)
if i clap,i PuSh-In-SluGz,and leave u in a BoX CoNFuSeD like RuBiX-CuBeZ...(6)
5...an actual punch, but on a played concept!!
yeah i wear da armor,gotta protect da chest-bro...(7)
got it unda da white t,hand gripin neva letn da teck-go...(8)
3...weak, what is wearin armour gotta do with dissin ya opponent
i been LyRICaL since i FiRsT-LeaRnEd-Ta-TaLk...(9)
been HuStLeN since i FiRsT-LeArnEd-Ta-WaLk...(10)
2...talkin bout yaself is gay!!
u been a FaG-SiNcE-BiRtH...(11)
a TaRgEt,time ta put dis FaG-iN-DiRt...(12)
2...homo lines are gay (WORDPLAY)
he dont wear JeaNz,so iMMa BlaSt-HiS-SkiRt...(13)
putin 16 in hiz AnuS,but his AsS-WoNt-HuRT...(14)
3...WTF!!! this is a battle, what the fuck are you in!!
u'z juzt a PraCtiCe-DuMmy,who be ActiN-FuNny,BrOkE n BuMMin...(15)
only time He SpiT a LoT iz when his BoYFriEnD CuMMin...(16)
3...homo shit again!!!

OVERALL: 26/80



only slow cats supportin this lame...
my victory's gon prolly be more underscored than his name...
5...aight personal, cud be better!!
think you look mean in your throwback...
but on the real dogg...your the kinda small fish i usually throw back...
4...naw!! this was weak yo!!
when i fish for bitches with my long cock...
but if your girl come near me...i just might hook 'er like ya mom's job...
5...kinda funny, but you need to word shit better!!
rewind a minute and look who you steppin to
cmon dogg...even dude in your sig looks skeptical...
6...nice line, similar concept to what i used recently!!
no wonder real vets dont see yall...
when that l column's lookin like a fat kid on the see saw...
6...LoL!! nice line!! fat kids are cool.
and im sorry to my fans on the site...
id have way more personals...if id ever heard of dude in my life...
7...werd!!! this punch makes up for the whole verse!!
nobody thinks im gon be passin the belt...
you know your gon lose...look even your sig's askin for help...
6...gettin better with the punches now!!
plus you act thug but you aint movin that weight...
and you and i both know...the only cream you ever had's on your face...
4...BOO!!! homo shit is played!!

OVERALL: 43/80


pretty weak battle
i have seen both do better.....
...cream, you had mostly shit talkin and played concepts....
.......there were no real punches in ya verse
and schema had some played concepts...........
......started off wack but came good to the end
....but then finished with a played closer.....
but still had punches in his verse.....so my vote is....

V/ - schema

RTF on this battle!!!!
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