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Old 05-24-05, 09:35 PM   #21
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Voted For: Golden Dayz

this battle was tight

Lady Fiya.....
i thought you had a real nice way of approaching this battle, the topic wasn't all too difficult and yet you managed to drop a verse that had a complex way of lookin at it.....i liked how the verse also had a sort of relaxed feel about it, the imagery of the verse was nice, you really brought the topic to life....ya flow was on point throughout and the vocabs in there was nice to........overall i give it 8/10


Golden Dayz.....
you had a decent take on the topic to, your structure was pretty much flawless and it was nice how you split it into the three different sections.......you went the way of describing an event in ya verse, you did it well and i was feelin the verse, a nice piece of imagery......your vocabs was nice to and your flow was near perfect.....the thoughts you put into the verse to go with the whole event was a nice touch, not like some who just try to tell a story about sumthin....overall i give this an 8.5/10


yes, it was that close.......
overall i didn't expect either of these drops based on the topic, both took an original way of approaching the battle and they twisted the topic with complex pieces that stayed on the topic....both had nice vocabs and feeling in their verses but overall i think Golden barely edged it out.

V/ - Golden Dayz

RTF!! on this battle!!! don't and i will have my vote removed!!! cuz ya know how sum ppl dont both returnin the favour!!!

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