Thread: no need for tha hate!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-24-05, 09:37 PM   #7
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It Was Decent...
It Wasnt Really Anything Special For Me...

I Think You Need To Work On Your Storyline...
Make It More Complex With Twists And Such...
Cuz Now Its Sorta Boring...

Stay Up And Keep Writing Though...
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