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Old 05-24-05, 10:24 PM   #12
King Solo
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Voted For: Stanza

im "rippin text","tearin out ya words" when my punches is hittin ya head
"dismember your rhyme scheme" and "killin ya stanza" when im fillin da lead
5...not really hittin, more talkin shit!!
da only way u could "step all over my rhymes",is if I "spit on da sidewalk"
I bring da "vengeance to ya livin room",that means u gonna "die hard"
5...worded wrong, rhymin wasn't perfect either!!
look kid ur "bars is improperly written" so u need ta "change ya name"(stanza)
Im stayin wit "flames",only way to stop my bars was if u came wit "reign"
4...weak. first line was bleh!!
I "drive thru" dis fag like fast food,he couldn't stop me if he was a "red light"
I bet he "shines" in battle like a "deer crossin da road" in da "head lights"(lol)
5...aight meta, but callin sumone gay is played!!
please u must be "kiddin",cuz u "scared of me" like I was "michael jackson"
only chance of you winnin dis is if u flipped ur win percentage to "likable fractions"
4...weak first line, MJ shit is played!!
kid im the main feature,u just da "sideline attraction" like a "cheerleader"
I bet his parents kicked him out as worthless,and RV...doesnt like him here neither
4...weak again, and played slef-glorifyin shit!!

OVERALL: 27/60



Ima Speed up This Dude Heart Rate Like Old Ppl Having Sex
He Wishin Viagra could Help Now But all he got is Spandex
5...first line was nice, wasn't feelin the 2nd!!
Yo Your Not On My Level Son ...Lets compare The Records
I'll Tear Your verse Apart & Take The S Outta Ya Sketchers
5...nice, but the first line was borderline self-G!!
So You Not Throwin Punchez at me Son You Jus A Ketcher
I Felt Like Hitler When I Toke Down This German Shepard
5...consistensy is good, but i've seen better from ya!!
You Might Wanna Duck Jus Look What My Rymes is Holdin
U Aint Been on Da Grind Since T.Hawks Pro Skateboarding
6...2nd line original concept!!
See I Make You & Break You So I Live Up to Yo Avy
Last Time U Found Dirt, Was When U Was Pickin Daisies
4...weak, not a real hard punch!!
See Now that Ive Done Ten Lines Its Only Fair To Stop Here
Bcuz When I Spit This Dude Head will Feel Lopsided
................ As If He were Hearing Out Of One ear
6...funny, decent closer!!

OVERALL: 31/60


not the best battle
.......i have seen both do better.......
adrenaline had some played concepts.......
.....no real creative punches....vocab was pretty basic
stanza had a couple of real funny punches.....
.....his vocab wasnt all too creative......
came with some played concepts to............
......but overall was more consistent.....

V/ - stanza

RTF on this battle!!!!
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