Voted For: Bonecollector

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he had better punches,nice wordplay,dope opener and a nioce strong ending to close it,the structure i felt was more readable and better formatted also..plus he had more sufficient personals...

Aurora
you had a few personals also but not damaging in my book...you could of been more creative,your srtucture was decent not bad but okay....,the flow was blah,decent personals...

anyways bonecollecter came hard and strong while airora came decent....

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