Damn...dope ass piece right here, real deep
I like tha concept...this is actually a new one to me...I really enjoyed reading this piece and hope to see more like it.

Favorite Lines:

so i guess i'm going to hell
cause i'm that man who grew up with love
but was consumed by hate
so forgive father for i am sin, the human race

Overall 9/10 (jus cuz tha flow was a lil choppy in some places)