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Old 05-25-05, 05:07 AM   #24
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aiight good battle yo.. aurora u need to improve ur structure a bit.. lets get into it....

diagnosis - ok, your verse was decent... your opener was a nice personal, your closer was pretty sick... your whole verse flowed very well didnt fall off point... your punches and personals were good and structure was good a few lines were stretched but good... you need to up on ur vocabulary a bit more but overall good verse.. nice creativity..

Aurora - your verse was more simple, your lines were stretched as hell mayne, you had some good punches but not as many as diagnosis... your verse flowed well apart from near the middle where it fell off att times... your vocab was ok but like i said to diagnosis u need to up it... and ur creativty was aiight...

opener - D
closer - A
flow - D
punches - D
vocab - Tie
structure - D
creativity - D
vote - D, no hate just how i saw it