Voted For: Murdz
This was an okay battle but ima give this one to Murdz
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Originally Posted by Yvonne
I neva had intensions of eatin but i just hadda come 2 dinner
ima tear u apart like chicken and check me pick u wit a finger
i once knocked off ur knukkle and i c u back in deciet
you fuckin in the wrong battle BITCH,too bad u cant s'it
its sad u think to be a hero when u just a genuine bitch
cos babies break thru ur ego and make u re-arrange ur shit
his punches r like jelly that y i got him plastered like nelly
if u really hate licking candy tell me wdf u doin on ur dogs belly
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Ehh...this was an okay verse... it could have been alot better... try to use better consitant punchlines,...maybe couple of meta's and try to do name plays.. overall keep it up..if you came harder you would have won this battle
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Originally Posted by Murdz
yvonne, aka shemale, she, he... what gender are you,really, does anyone know?
How do you go from a general in the army to some childish femcee-wannabe ho?~*
you resemble a flower- you're under the same classification as "herbs"
yvonne's like a table menu- she goes to fold and disappear when she gets served~
bitch you fake... you play with more pussies then animal adoption shelters
I'll make you dissolve in my spit like you consist of Alka Seltzer~
You can be Alicia Silverstone- I'll make you leave this set totally "Clueless"
the truth is You couldn't come hard even if you ejaculated frozen vaginal fluids~
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Pretty nice drop...some nice punchlines they were consistant some hit hard , some were alittle bit of a filller...structure was okay , alittle off...felt you could have used personals it would have helped alot
But overall vote -Murdz keep it up both