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Originally Posted by ¤ÐÅž¤
fell off in some bars... basic vocab....
your better then most with multi's but the vocab
n having extended lines with just normal 2 syllable
rymhes at the end was your downfall....
topic was'nt overly creative.... had no wordplay or metas in the
drop, text was basic n straight to the point.......
but considering the lack of talent on this board..
maybe its best its not complex.......no hate...7/10
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Fuck man....i hate that bullshit, its a fucking open mic not something thats published...who the fuck really cares about that bullshit, your hella wack if you do...i dont give a fuck about wordplay in a poem...vocab or whatever...fuck all that, you can critique all that in a battle or something, but shit its a fucking open mic, lighten up nigga..damn...If i had a poem with one meta, a lil bit of vocab, and one of each of the things your looking for in one sentence youd have to give it a ten out of ten by what your saying,, wack ass street pickle...