Voted For: Adrenaline

adrenline:
im "rippin text","tearin out ya words" when my punches is hittin ya head
"dismember your rhyme scheme" and "killin ya stanza" when im fillin da lead
^^^^1ST LINE WAS ALRITE...BUT I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE DA SECOND
da only way u could "step all over my rhymes",is if I "spit on da sidewalk"
I bring da "vengeance to ya livin room",that means u gonna "die hard"
^^^^SIDEWALK & DIE HARD DONT RYHME...U FORCE DAT
look kid ur "bars is improperly written" so u need ta "change ya name"(stanza)
Im stayin wit "flames",only way to stop my bars was if u came wit "reign"
^^^^WHOLE BUNCH OF PLAYED SHIT IN DIS BAR..DA MULTI WAS ALRITE THO
I "drive thru" dis fag like fast food,he couldn't stop me if he was a "red light"
I bet he "shines" in battle like a "deer crossin da road" in da "head lights"(lol)
^^^NO
please u must be "kiddin",cuz u "scared of me" like I was "michael jackson"
only chance of you winnin dis is if u flipped ur win percentage to "likable fractions"
^^^^LOL U TRYIN 2 HARD FAM
kid im the main feature,u just da "sideline attraction" like a "cheerleader"
I bet his parents kicked him out as worthless,and RV...doesnt like him here neither
^^^GOOD FLOW...BUT DA PUNCH WASN'T REALLY DAT GOOD

stanza:
Ima Speed up This Dude Heart Rate Like Old Ppl Having Sex
He Wishin Viagra could Help Now But all he got is Spandex
^^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME...BUT DA PUNCH WAS WACK
Yo Your Not On My Level Son ...Lets compare The Records
I'll Tear Your verse Apart & Take The S Outta Ya Sketchers
^^^LOL WACK
So You Not Throwin Punchez at me Son You Jus A Ketcher
I Felt Like Hitler When I Toke Down This German Shepard
^^^NO
You Might Wanna Duck Jus Look What My Rymes is Holdin
U Aint Been on Da Grind Since T.Hawks Pro Skateboarding [b]
^^^HOLDING & SKATEBOARDING DONT RYHME..FORCED
See [b]I Make You & Break You So I Live Up to Yo Avy
Last Time U Found Dirt, Was When U Was Pickin Daisies
^^^LOL..NO
See Now that Ive Done Ten Lines Its Only Fair To Stop Here
Bcuz When I Spit This Dude Head will Feel Lopsided
................ As If He were Hearing Out Of One ear
^^^VERY WEAK...CLOSER

V/ADRENALINE...HE CAME MORE CREATIVE....STANZA NO HATE OR NOTHIN REAL TALK STEP YA RAP GAME UP DOGG

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^^he's scared.lol