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Old 05-25-05, 12:53 PM   #14
Kawn Flixx
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Eh... it was decent sorta fell off here and there..
You vocabulary was simplicit...could have been better
You had nice multies , ill give you that
but you needed some better vocab and wordplay..
Some of your lines looked alittle stretched wasnt feeling that..
Structure was all over the place...
Drop had no meta's or any really nice wordplay..
Overall it was pretty much a very simple drop
ive seen better from you ... but keep it up
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