wow, missed this one, here goes: the emotional factor was strong in this piece,you had it set up nice,with the calls in the background,i could almost hear the elevator music..lol, this was very creative, your vocabulary was strong as well, i enjoyed this poem, it was smart, sentimental and nostalgic, good shit.1

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