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Ahhh this could have been alot better , ive seen alot better from you ..
Structure was possibly the best thing you had in your drop...
Emotions were there...but they werent really good, imagery..
was decent ..it could have been alot better..probably would have been better
if you made it alittle longer... Flow was there but it wasnt really flowing to good..
Overall keep it up ive seen you do alot better..just keep it up....
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