Voted For: P.aradox
This was a pretty weak battle but to me P.aradox wont his battle
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Originally Posted by P.aradox
Bitch still lives in the past..refuses to believe Tikz are dead yet…..
Talk shit, my verse will leave ya wide-eyed just like ya text rec…..
Evolved in this battle..this dude has finally moved onto Phase 2…..
Now he's a necrophiliac..cuz his sig is ridin part of a dead crew*…..
Ya don't spit..i got ya silenced like libraries, don't say a word..
Ya an alias, made this fresh account after realisin ya still a herb..
Phase has been P.roperly H.unted A.nd S.laughtered with E.ase……
Wasn't hard, this fool is merely the 3rd 'Phase' of 'herb'itis disease……
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This was a pretty good drop , had some nice punchlines some were okay , some were just plain fillers.. you tried to use some personals and i comend you on that , but it was okay , nothing really to good , structure was good , flow was decent , .. Overall pretty decent verse... it was enough to win this battle ,..elevate and learn to make more direct punchlines.
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Originally Posted by Phase
Unaware of His "State" of Mind Delaware Became a Paraodox..
A "Bitch" in Heat This Dogs Always Lookin to ride a Pair a Cocks..
This Kids Like a "Sceptic Tank" All he has Comin out is Shit..
Im Knockin em out in "2" Bars like Roy Jones Jr Taken a Hit..
This Kid aint "Incredible" Cause he Got beat by a Marvel Comic..
Are you Joking This is a "Game" Cause im Kicken his "Tail" Like Sonic..
Real Quik Let me W"rap-it-Up" Like Were Workin a BET HotLine..
Cause i Dont wanna make this kid "Whine" More then a Grape-Vine..
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Eh.,.. your verse was pretty good you had like 2 nice bars.. the rest to me were mostly fillrers... you had nice structure... You had an okay personal about being beat by a marvel comic , pretty good , Flow was on point.. you had some okay punchlines..Overall if you came alittle harder you would have won
Overall vote =P.aradox