Voted For: tim dim

Only way you'll elivate your verse is if you scroll down
Shit, 14 posts don't even have a rep to hold down

WHORED HIS WHOLE VERSE.

Hurting this noob is no fun, I dont wanna be the one
To leave you 0-1, eating weeds the only time you spit dope son

PLAYED BUT WAS ATLEAST A PUNCH

Now I've made you pissed you've cracked a fat one
But your only shooting blanks like a cap gun

NOPE....

smokey yours was a story of random words, no punches or flow and hard as fuck to read.

you seriousely need to either read a tut. on structure and punches, or quit.....

tim gets it for using a punch or two and being readable....

no hate, rtf so i dont need to dq my vote.

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