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Old 05-25-05, 04:30 PM   #9
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Voted For: Raining Waffles

How you gon claim you a hustla you cant sell crack to a feind.
and if you was a hustla you could sell a motor some gasoline.
3/10...Very Wack
My shit is so hard, it will give you the fucking efex of crack.
Ya shit was almost 'dope', cuz you said weed on the track.
5/10...Dis Not A "TRACK" Its Text But Nice 2nd Line
Fuck "raining" people call ya battles drizzle when you spit.*
And bitch, mines is like acid cuz it'll burn holes through bricks.
5/10...Nice 1st Line...2nd Was OK
me spittin bad somethings missing like warren sapp w/o hard-hits.
Regardless of ya hardships, sit back and get shot out like targets.
6/10...Dat Was Aight Too
Ya shit is always wack, so you no its common like when stars-sniff.**
Take a grip of what I spit muscles ain’t gonna make ya Bars Lift.***
6/10...Best Line...

Ya Punches Were Real Soft Fam...You Needa Elevate Make Em Hit Harder...Get More Creative When You Usin Ya Punches...They Werent Clever...Took No Thought

He goes "Ahh" for waffles, says to insert jokes, but I know what this bitch wants
Your text wouldn't stand out in this battle if you figured out how to switch fonts
6/10...Nice 2nd Line
This dude's verse is so full of fillers, how does he manage to cram any words in?
My punches make ya face pieces fall off, like post-op with the Jackson family surgeon
7/10...Aha Nice Personal
Some yearn to throw flowers at funerals, I'm lobbin' grenades at your coffin
Nobody likes you in Cali, so you get bitch slapped in Detroit every so often
6.5/10...Anotha Nice Personal
Claiming you spit fire - but I'm straight freezing emcees with my ice gaze
Deadlines making' this herb's feet cold, he might not handle the limit of 1 day
5.5/10...Ehh Dat Was Aight

Ya Shit Was Good...Punches Hit Harder Than Infamuz's...Ya Shit Was More Clever...You Used Some Personals On Him...I Could Flow Wit Ya Shit, Use More Vocab Otha Than Dat You Got Most Categories So You Took It

RTF...$cream At Me
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