Voted For: AckRite

GOOD:

Flow - ackrite
Structure - ackrite
Punchlines - ackrite
vocab - ackrite
Wordplay - ackrite
Nameplay - ackrite

BAD:

forced Rhymes - none
Forced Multis - none
Non Sence - none

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - none
Creative Punches - ackrite
creative multi's - ackrite

PERSONALS:
"...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho...
...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!..."

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: none
Closing: bernonedown

COMMENT:
Your structure and flow was fucked up Bern, preschool vocab, ain't haitin but if you fix that structure you'll improve ur shit, try to have better punches....

V/ akrite

RTF!!!!!

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