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Voted For: CA$per
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Originally Posted by kid~Ca$
imma school this child,he just a myth from tha good book.....
new to r.v dogg nice title,lets me now that your shook......
u winnin is unlikely,like martin luther in tha klan.....
quit while u ahead,go home and re-think your plan....
kid i got your style pegged,wacker than jon cena rappin.....
and dont use no fuckin gun-play,cause we all know u actin....
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Ehh.. this was a decent drop..it could have been alot better if you used some more consitant punchlines..maybe a couple personals... it was overall good , but it could have been alot better.. learn to use more harder punchlines... your flow was okay ...structure was decent ... Overall pretty average verse.. keep it up
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Originally Posted by Zecharaih
He's Living In An Imaginative, World, But Yo Ghost Don't-Exist
I'm Murdering You And Getting Away With It Like The Pope-Kid
I'll Poke-in Your Throat-An Leave You Stranded With No-Prints
Hope-This Is Your Plan Of Retiring,Just Make Your Will Note-Kid
Bastard, Get Yo Ass-Kicked, You With Guns Of Plastic & Plaster
This Battle Was Finished Before It Begun Kid One Kid I'm Casper*
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This was a pretty weak drop ya first line in ya opener was good then it died... if you kept it consitant you would have won... next time yuse btter punchlines.. a couple of personals... overall elevate ..seen you do better... but to me i think cas took this one to me he just came alittle harder
Vote- Cas
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