very very deep. i like the way you played this...its like poker. you won the HAND. very nice imagery GOD man this was nice i cant explain enuff how deep this goes. You have touched mostly the main espects in our life today. very nice.
fav part.
Quote:
The Right Wing & Left. An Overbearing Concience Among Our Sholders
As We Rely On The Angels Of Miracles & Read The New Books Of Revelations
Modeled Covers Personifying Pandoras Image With A Medusa Visage
As Our Hearts Sink Deep Within Our Stomachs & Wear Our Soul On Our Sleeves
As We Punch Our Time Out In This World & End It With The Knives In Our Backs.
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^^^the nicest lines, you really explained everything in just this little verse.
keep your head up.