Banned: Biting
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IP:
now im going to have to say this battle goes to "WITS". He first of all had a better Structure, it looked tidy. He had nice flow, i can really think about what he is saying.
best lines used was.
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.:: My eyes are still closed, and I can feel the back of the searching hand, ::.
.:: Never have I felt so exposed... seems life never goes exactly how you plan. ::.
.:: I can remember the harsh lights, staring down at me like surrounding suns. ::.
.:: Claustrophobia coming, the walls so tight...holding me, giving no room to run. ::.
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very nice liness used here, so much imagery.
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