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Old 05-25-05, 06:56 PM   #4
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Voted For: Eyetalik

Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard
—decent opener
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given
—wack
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated
—pretty good
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries
—eh, not feeling this one
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*
—kinda decent here
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'
—using the last word as HA? Tf.. an okay punch
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*
—kinda nice here
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One
—nope


You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
—nope
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak
—wack, but decent multies though
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
—okay
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain
—decent multies, weak punch
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin
—decent
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'
—decent again

overall – both drops were weak here, but Eyetalilk took this one,
just had harder punches (by a lil bit), structure was decent.. (don’t
center ur structures though), and he had a decent wordplay up in
there, but the punches could’ve been harder though, just saying
and Murdz, work on ur punches though, ur multies were decent in
here, but the punches need some work though, & both.. add some
more personas in there though..
..no hate
RTF Eyetalik.. Or This Vote Gets Removed!!

…Seriously
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