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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
How r you a ''Mastamind''?.. you aint even masterd ya own Mind
split personality? wit them raps we're sure your a Lil Wayne Mime
5...aight the first line was blah here!!! and basically the second line aint really a punch!!
Fuck'a rhyme, he handles his voters like O.J....Usin Blackmail
Reppin Ghost town?......kid, steppin ta me i'll spook-ya-pale
5...a decent setup but ruined by the end product, the punch to it was borderline on self-glorifying!!
lets rate rhymes on a scale, hence why your a LightWeight
Even british emcees sit an tell you...''Oi, you aint tight, mate!''
6...aight the first line was kinda played, any punch on weight is gay, but the british part was funny!!
We all dont mean ta Hate, but i'm simply .........voicing Facts
an this trick thinks ''flippin'' a skript mean handstands an Akrobats
5...first line was pretty much filler, the 2nd line was not good becuz ya just played on the "flippin" if ya would have thrown in wordplay on "flippin the skript" into the acrobat shit it wud've been cool!!
layed out on his Back, its broken, but at least ya think your not Whack!
when in all reality, niggas get more quality from a 5 dollar Sac
5...no!! the setup line to the punch basically decreased the quality of the overall punch!!
while your credabilities still in-tact, u still have Chance ta Log Out
Faggot sat 'n told me he's a Milf...then asked ''whats that all about?!''
4...ok wtf!!! gayness in lines is played like fuck, and you didnt pull off the MILF line at all!!
dude actually thought it meant .......''Merkin Is 'Lyricals' fun''
like umm are u so stupid ya think i'd actually give u Propps? son!
5...not feelin this, the 2nd line basically sayin that you are so great, and you aint givin him props!!
I wont lie, i got my hand on a gun while you cluth ya Ring Peice
fuck Livin Legendz, dudes idea of ''FAMILY'' fun is fuckin his Neice
5...WTF!!! played concept and you failed to put a good twist on it!!
if lyrics were a Leece, you'd be about 5 months OverDue
my pockets would be so big from your late payments.....
people would be like ''woah! happy ta see me, arent you?''
7...WERD!!! finally a funny ass line!! this has been the best so far!!
but yo I'm Thru, your whored, now back ta the Red Light District..
Oh, we still waitin for your verse?.........I Thought I Missed-It
5...weak closer, the first line had fuck all to do with anything and you basically ended with some filler!!
OVERALL: 52/100
i could tell this would be a good battle but i wonder why he risks it(1)
he's prolly hope'n the votas'll ride his bitch ass like sea biscut(2)
5...not feelin this opener, you went on a played concept and threw in a filler setup line!!
see esco i can hurt physically but i'll leave mentality scars(3)
but with a flow like Fort Knots you aint stealin my bars(4)
5...not a real good attempt at a meta, i get the concept but you worded it wrong!!
look if you have heat jus leave it wit you cuz i kno im keepin a pistol(5)
favorite clips a magazine your body jus subscribe'd to the issue(6)
5...this was weak to!!! i mean seriously the 2nd line to it was cud've been a lot better, and not a real good punch
leave you bleedin from open tissue you thinkin im jokin wit you(7)
bitch im bout to give you an L like i was smokin wit you(8)
5...aight line, a little multi in there but again played concept you basing shit around!!
now you cant bust a pimple but claim you poppin dem thangs(9)
phew i'll have you killed in 7 days like you was watchin the rang(The Ring movie)(10)
5...decent punch, a fairly original concept but you ruined it with the whole "rang" pronunciation shit, makes it look like you were forcin the rhyme!!!
YOU VERSE ME; is like raging bulls to a matador, ya raps a bore...(11)
Get laid out thinkin U slick wit all them metaphors(12)
5...again, ya punch seems to be more filler-like than really hittin ya opponent!!
U typin with no flow, kinda like a drippin faucet... (13)
must got A.D.D...cuz i paid attention to ur rhyme, but lost it(14)
6...LoL!!! the setup was kinda weak, but the punch made me laugh a little so props for that!!
I’m dissing you're weak raps, ya fag style n ya queer hooks(15)
Cuz u'll 'never be signed' like some 'retarded kids yearbooks'(16)
6...ok, gay shit is played!!! but any line about retarded people makes me laugh!!!
Are you listening to me....call me Qtip....I'm clearin out these "wacks" (wax),(17)
Get ready...this is the message I'm sending you,525-7689, did u get the "fax",(facts)(18)
6...again, a nice punch...the first line was mediocre but the fax(facts) wordplay was pretty tight!!
Fuck it ima finish u off easy nice n slow(19)
esco got murked wurse den 5 clips 2 his dome(20)
5...a weak finish, you started with a few nice punches to the end but the closer was weak!!
OVERALL: 53/100
ok this was an average battle
i think that teph came majorly weak....i seen him do a lot better, he had quite a few played punches, adn his setups were kinda bleh!!! on e real funny punch i liked....likewise lyrical came with some played shit, some filler and no real hot killer lines, although he improved to the end but then finished weak!!!
no hate to either, both y'all can do better
but my vote goes to....
V/ - LyricalMa$tamind
be sure to return the favour on my CALI battle
link is at the bottom of my sig!!!
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