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Old 05-26-05, 12:32 AM   #2
fluidmoon
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This was a decent drop, i felt you could have put more effort into the words and what you were trying to convey emotionally. Although, you definatley had the right idea with this concept, i don;t think it was your drop of a lifetime. I thought the first keystyle was more original, because the words seemed to flow out more. Keep dropping and i hope that what i said made sense,as i was not trying to be offensive,but helpful..1
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