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Old 05-26-05, 12:39 AM   #11
King Solo
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well i'm gonna be cool and disagree with everyone..........

the second verse had a fucked up flow, with those stretched lines they need a few multies in there to help it flow better, also a lot of the punches used were not all that original, i have seen pre-writ ballz on loads of sites, also that juggling ballz line along with the fuckin in stalls is not original at all.

the first verse flowed a lot better and the punches were pretty funny, and they were actual punches, some of the shit in the 2nd verse seemed more like statements than punches!!!!

so i wud pick the first verse!!!
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