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Old 05-26-05, 12:43 AM   #12
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Originally Posted by Raining Waffles
Fuck man....i hate that bullshit, its a fucking open mic not something thats published...who the fuck really cares about that bullshit, your hella wack if you do...i dont give a fuck about wordplay in a poem...vocab or whatever...fuck all that, you can critique all that in a battle or something, but shit its a fucking open mic, lighten up nigga..damn...If i had a poem with one meta, a lil bit of vocab, and one of each of the things your looking for in one sentence youd have to give it a ten out of ten by what your saying,, wack ass street pickle...

you hate people pointing out flaws in your work..
i put it to you straight, it was aight... im not one to start beef
over such a pointless comment such as yours above..
learn how to take criticism in all forms..when you
do, you will get better, until then try not to let
your emotions make you look like an over zealous
2 year old.. like i said ...NO HATE
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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