Aight, lemme break this down...

Concept is nice, can work inspiring and it's all truth you're spitting here. Vocab could've been upped a little bit but the simplicity of it gave the piece a more powerful vibe. I'm not really feeling last 2 lines of the hook, first 2 were cool. Had your flow on lock, went really indepth on the topic, had eye for details. Overall interesting, insightful and oh so true piece!

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