nice ending, i liked the majority of the piece
i felt the wording was a bit off in parts n it
didnt quite deliver your content to its fullest
but i only found this in a couple bars gurl...
this was quite the piece, good length...
vocab was there, but i only got one queery
did you mean phenominal landscape..?
its just phenomenon didnt quite flow
properly in my opinion.....stay up drama..[thumbsup]

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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!