aight peepin... i like this beat... the chorus is on point, kinda basic but its coo... ya got on beat just fine... ya lyrics are really basic, i am more into the effort put behind lyrical content, this shyt is kinda weak lyrically, stubbles tha bunny? who tha fuck is that? this sounds like u wanna b 50 cent too much, i mean u got a good voice but i hate what u rappin about, stop talkin bout ur hard in tha streets, i hate wen ppl rap about this shyt, if u hard u wouldnt have to say it, ppl would just know feel me? well u do have a good voice n are on beat, lol like d said, cut out that last adlib. over all this shyt was not my typa music but keep droppin i kno alot of ppl like this kinda garbage music, not sayin ur garbage, just saying that this is the genre of music that the industry feeds off of, it should change if u ask me.. but good luck

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