beat is diff, i dont like it doe
quality needs to be upped, beat volume needs to go down
Flow is really bad.. i see how u wanna flow, but it aint working
delievery is really boring, not very enjoyable to listen too.
Lyrics are very basic. and you lines are too short, you pasuing unnessecary

Same for the hook, not too good

2/10

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