The Paragraph President
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Cong
um you had a very good stucture very good flow as well but the thing that i didnt really feel was your punchlines they were weak well decent actually just not good enough i guess but your personals were decent just not connecting right wordplay wasn't really hitting hard and overall i just wasn't feeling your verse 1
Diag
well of course you had a better verse your flow was pretty damn good and ya stucture was good you hit hard with lots of personals and the thing that made me feel like giving you the win was that you had better personals and punchlines so overall you had the better verse wordplays were hitting harder as well. 1
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