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Old 05-27-05, 01:03 AM   #8
Kawn Flixx
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Voted For: Eyetalik

This was a pretty tight battle but to me i think Anamosity took this one...

Quote:
Originally Posted by Murdz


You were only concieved as a seed in order ta be beat
I'm helpin ya achieve yer destiny by introducin ya to defeat
So bitch take a seat and read as I excrete lyrical heat
Makin ya feel like the Lakers facin a 7 Day losin streak°
Cause even if you were gettin head ya couldnt attain brain°°
Just abstain in order ta refrain from lyrical death in this domain
Since I'm insane like a fiend tryin ta obtain bane for his vein°°°
Unleashin a reign ta leave ya slain & put yer body in a sewer drain
Yer like the american idol sleepin with a judge n still couldnt win°°°°
u gona begin bein a has been when I break ya like the wall in Berlin°°°°°
I make this lightweights head spin like he thin drinkin too much gin°°°°°°
Smack that grin of Eyetalik's face and rename this bitch Frownin'

Pretty tight verse,, but it could have been alot better... structure was good, punchlines were there some were hitten hard some were just fillers... personals were Ehh cus your personals really didnt have anything to do with Anamosity..Overall nice drop..if you had came alittle harder you would have won ..

Quote:
Originally Posted by Anamosity

Listen-Kid Your Missing-It, The Point Is Ya Still A Herb
Ya Style Ya Flow Ya Lyrics Ya Name Is Still Un-Heard
And It's A Proven Fact That Legend's Is Not Living...
Ya Wins Is Like Charity, The Whole Seven Was Given
Getting Votes Not Unless Tha Q Becomes Straight-Kid
You Dope? That's Like Saying 50 Cent Aint Overated
I Don't Mean To Expose You But You A Wanna-Be-MC
You Winning.. Is 1 Out Of A Mill Like Lottery- Entries
You Remind Me Of Some Weed You Symbolize Herbs
Kid's So Original He Had To Recycle The Name Murdz*
Couldn't Drop 'Dope Shi't With 'Coke' In His Crack' HA
Only Time He Pack Is 'Picnics' I'd Put A Hole In His 'Sack'
He Couldn't Elevate If He Boarded A Plain To New York
Only Time This 'Gangster Had Beef' Is At A 'Food Court'*
His Flow Isn't Noticeable..Like Hawaii On A Map-Son
I'd Leave This Coward Devoured This Is A Wrap-One

Nice drop homie , i was feeling it nice structure it was on point, nice flow... it was good , punchlines were hitten hard , some were okay, personals were okay they were pretty good, Overall nice drop fam , you won this battle in my point of view , keep it up

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