Voted For: Valor

Line....you had a pretty nice verse...but the rhyming was forced in a lot of cases....seems like you through in words and phrases jus because they rhymed....I thought the middle part of your verse was the best....imagry was ok as was emotion..could be upped tho...

Valor...also a pretty nice verse....i thought you had real good emotion and ok imagry....internal rhyming was nicely done, but like Line...it seemed forced at times...othewise this was a sound piece

Valor wins with stronger emotion