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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Battle record hidin cuz you don't wana expose the L's it gots
Your punchlines couldn't "connect" if you wrote em' on "Lego blocks"
—4, played punch, been used b4
He's been on my dick to battle must have a sick infatuation
His battle history is full of "short-cummings" like "midget masturbation"
—6, decent punch
You couldn't spit "flames" if you traded your teeth for "spark plugs"
Next time you go to the club don't wear Sideout fuckin Wal-mart thugs
—4, didn’t like this line
Marv's "ass" couldn't make music if he was "sotomized" by a flute
You could audio battle a mute and still lose the dispute
—7, pretty decent bar
Lex – 21/40, overall here u had an aight drop
only 2 bars were wack, cuz one of them was played
and the other was just weak.. could’ve added more
personas in there, & don’t center ur verse, just makes
it wack on that’s not how ur structure looks like, but
ur other 2 bars were good, though, & u had an aight
drop
da nicest? MaRV's da name...im big but in text & lex he's little.
knew u were a "fruit" since i found out ya old name was "mc skitlz".*
—7, pretty nice persona
punk stop,u aint him i could c u luv pac but when gunz pop!.
ima leave ya "stomach in a coffin" datz whut i call a "lunch-box".
—4, lunch-box lines = played
lex weak dis guy gets pitty,cuzz nun of his lines is witty..
ya rappin's "bad-boy" there4 u'll neva sign with "diddy"..
—6, decent persona
only 'ice' u'll eva have is frozen water,ya moms i keep da hoe in order.
da bitch done gave me more "head & tale" than a “roll of quarter's”
—5, average punch
Marv – 22/40, overall u had a good drop also,
Couple of punches need help on those but
Personally u had some decent personas, but
Also u had a good use of them in this advantage
In this battle, that lunch-box line was played
Cuz other members of RV & myself have alrdy
Used that shit, but that’s makes ur shit played too
Ur structure was okay, & the punches were decent
But overall u took this one by a little bit though..
..no hate
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