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this time, lets just pretend ur as good as me...
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hmm...I like the flow in this..it would keep the reader interested...I just read it because of that and if u can do that then that's good..but since I only read it like dat I didn't really catch any of the metaphors and what not..but this is good...
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Originally Posted by Spoken Word is Bond
I've broken fingers, broken toes, hyper extended my elbow, broken my
ankle, torn ligaments in my ankle, cracked my head open numerous times,
gashed my legs, arms, and fingers severly.....all from skateboarding or
riding dirtbikes.
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DAYUM!!.....................DAMN!!................ .........did I say damn?
im just that gangsta...
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