good shit...too real 4 rv mayne. half tha cats on this site scared 2 spit tha truth and tha few that do get no feedback. tha emotion in dis was evident from tha first few lines. imagery was a strong point. try to work on structuring your lines tho. other than that it was almost perfect. i give it 4/5 mics.. return da favor in my two new open mics.....1

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