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Voted For: 9th Degree
word boys.
>I could list all 9th's defaults, but I honestly don't know where to begin.
So this ignoramus hacked into my desk theme, just to get under my skin.
decent opener yo, 6/10
>Blasting concepts so weak, and throwing punches so played.
Accepting this battle, will have you receiving the opposite of OK’ed!
not okay? lol...kinda worded bad, punch isn' that hard 4/10
>I'll pick at your verse, and leave your wackness cavities exposed.
So ill leave 9th drowning in sorrow, when my punches break the bridge of his nose!
decent attempt at wordplay, not that effective 5/10
>When you see my drop, clutch ya clovers and try to remain brave.
After I throw him through a window of opportunity & into a world of pane.
word, seen this concept too many times, and actually i think 9th used this punch recently too, lol 5/10
overall: 20/40...not bad man, seems like you wrote it quick, most of your concepts have been done, so i suggest come up with some creative shit....ya know.....word, not bad though, still a decent battle, just nothing too special.....keep up.
>You winning this is a longshot, and you're not about to zoom in
'Cuz most newbs stink, but god damn kid, you're Fumin!
lol! wow, funny opener, good play off name 8/10
>Record's built up of a no-show, which is lucky for your chump rhymes
Those fighting stick figures are your only decent punchlines
cool...good avy play 7/10
>But maybe that avy's supposed to show you're so hard
>Fuck it, I'ma get rid of F like I got a bad report card
meh, not bad, concept has been done, but another decent name play 6/10
>I keyed quick, now I'll just wait for your verse
'Cuz we're all excited to see you drop...off the face of the earth
hahaha, great closer...to a solid verse, haha 8/10
overall: 29/40 word, this was definately one sided, 9th, you came out with some good stuff man, definately funny stuff man, haha, laughed at every line i think....no much to suggest to work on, you're pretty much set man, you know whats good.....good show man, keep up
v/9th degree, no hate
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