Yeah overall i was feelin this piece a whole lot it flowed very nice, there was still some choppy parts but overall ery god i felt the emotion and i could actually comprehend with your piece my favorite lines were:

The calls to wake up,
To tell em’ you love em,’
Miss em,’ couldn’t wait to kiss em,’
And even those calls to just sit and listen

Overall 8/10, good job man

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