[[Verse One: Atticus]]
Cold... So Self Aware Nearly Swelled With Null
Pain There Remains No Clearly Well, Hell All Fates Fallin Dull.
^I have no idea what this means
Full With Great Opportunities Dropped Late Pages Erased
Scribbled Blank Classics Seem Lacluster, To Muster Greatness
^kinda fillery but not too bad...
Deems Its Placement As This Obsene Dream... Lavish Covers
Tucked Under-Over Realities Blacklist At The Back Misunder-
Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's", Never Dones Continue To Run
Through A Life Of Light Blind To Strive With Eyes Fused Up.
^I have no idea what this means
As I Search For Comfort... Last Resort To Sore Is Some Form
More Or Less More Less Than More Yet The Love Makes This One A Whore.
Hunt For The Touch Of Anyone One That Can Form The Sence
Of Sudden Abundance... Fuck Me! Free Me From Poor Judgments!
this is too much for me...im like on multi overload...and i really dont understand what you mean by any of this...maybe im just stupid or maybe it doesnt make any sense
[[Chorus x2]]
Inpurity, How Pure They See...
Please Let Them See Me Bleed For Acceptance
Cuz My Wrists Slit And... I Think I Saw A Smile Seep
Against His Lips, "DAMN!"... Quick Razor Rip And Dance
To Please My Little Insecurities Rants.
[[Verse Two: OneStepBeyond]]
My insecurities are endless, life with dozens of twists,
Running from myself... and my purity, it doesn't exsist,
werd...
Attached mentally to my girl in which I struggle to fix,
I always fall One Step short, now failures strung in the mix,
Can't juggle the shits, so the pressure on my shoulder builds,
Yet to have soul instilled... still showing colder shrills,
youre reachin for multis with the showing colder shrills but i was feelin these two bars as a whole...i can understand what youre talking about and the feel is pretty cool...
Sposed to be a souljah, losing prides giving me colder chills,
Bottle up my firing emotions and when the molten builds,
One day they explode, flaming, burning, igniting the fuse,
fighting the fueds within myself, i'm frightened to choose,
real nice right here
Wether to change my life, but I descent still to badness,
The ability to do so is there... but my will is absent...
werd...this capped shit off...really nice stuff here...
[[Chorus x2]]
Inpurity, How Pure They See...
Please Let Them See Me Bleed For Acceptance
Cuz My Wrists Slit And... I Think I Saw A Smile Seep
Against His Lips, "DAMN!"... Quick Razor Rip And Dance
To Please My Little Insecurities Rants.
[[Verse Three: Atticus]]
Drift Through Days In Haze Of Blur Blue Shades Asume
A Tune That Drones Quick In Flash... Come To Play A Few
Hours Past... Waste Away The Class My Last Grade
A Fail Stale Brained... Maine's Influence Henced That Blaze
Of Smoke, Clouds Dround Out The Sounds Of Hope
Beyond The Pond Of Poison Possitioned In This Frown Of Rope.
The Drugs My Freedom Fiefdom Of Peace Piece Of Mind
Just Dug Its Grave-Lay-Pray One Day The Gates Free A Bind.
Now The Highs Familiar Still Your Frown Finds Out How
To Renounce This Drugs Feel Your Fucked, So You Cut Down To Cut... "OOOOOOOOOOOOOOW!!!!!"
pretty nice...i understand this more than the last one but still not totally...you should work on making more verses like this...not just like drifting off into nonsensical flowery language like the first verse...
hit up my gfx battle with hattrick...
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192021