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Hey I liked this one it was cool. I didn't understand this line though...
"To Please My Little Insecurities Rants." The Rants.. I dont know what your trying to say..

Now Atticus
"Cold... So Self Aware Nearly Swelled With Null
Pain There Remains No Clearly Well, Hell All Fates Fallin Dull."
Your maltis was good but you need to work way more on your vocab.. I really do like your style and will want to work with you sometime.. My fav line from you was..
"Tucked Under-Over Realities Blacklist At The Back Misunder-
Stood Youth Doomed By "Could Do's", Never Dones Continue To Run"
Wow word play was sick and made me think about my life. But Im stuck by just doing and don't think. Im hella sparadic.

OneStepBehind..
I really got caught into your verse.. I love how you started off..
"My insecurities are endless, life with dozens of twists,
Running from myself... and my purity, it doesn't exsist,
Attached mentally to my girl in which I struggle to fix,
I always fall One Step short, now failures strung in the mix,"
But as I said you need to work on vocalb, The word play was nice in here I liked how you added your name by an action.. really nice.
Honestly structure was dope by both of you.. good colab and worth the read.. to be honest I want to work with both of you...
Ah, and if you wanna return the favor just hit up "psst" or "WHAT! ask me why im in TC!"
Overall this was like, hmm 7.989/10 (LoL)

Sweft