some tips if u plan to continue text... dont hyphen random multies just so ppl know its a multie
dont separate ur lines like that. keep it one paragraph or whatever, otherwise, it looks weird. im glad u didnt use links bc thats garbage... otherwise, u had some pretty good multies. unfortunately, most of ur punches were played (not your fault) the second line didnt make too much sense to me but i liked that cali line. its so much like him...
just some feedback for ya.... good luck wit text if u continue it