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Old 05-27-05, 11:22 PM   #13
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Anamosity- great verse, you came with great structure, great metaz. Your opener was only 'eh', but everything afta was dope, from tha 2nd bar to tha 7th it was hot, only 1 played idea, and that was the elevate and foodcourt line....but even that wasnt too bad....8.75/10


murdz-ur verse was ok, i felt like you were trying to use elevated vocab to somewhat make ur verse. so throughout the whole verse it seemed like u were struggling to come up with bars. u need to just let that shit flow man. 7/10
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